Paired With Fate - Reviews

Great story, the writing quality is high but not too high to the point no people would like it and the updates is stable. The detail on character design could be improved to a higher level but the other 4 aspect is good.

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Congrats, there aren't enough words to describe how annoying reading this thing was...you attempted a story good job but damn...I had hope when he met the blacksmith but no...you kill him, give him some OP thing, take it away and give him some random thing that is basically pointless at this stage...excellent my friend excellent

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When your world is so stylish it even has its own fedora. Then there are the guns.Maybe just American who knows...But seriously, real talk. How many chapters will include fedoras? This might be a deal-breaker btw.

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An interesting MC that actually creates the story instead of passively following along with events. I like how he attempts to shape the world to his image instead of a MC that is constantly reacting.  I hope that the author can pull in some clan building elements.  I like that the MC is billed as a thinker first and should not have to rely on his own martial prowess to solve all problems.  Grammar could be better, but does not take away too much from the story.

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(I'm on episode 323.) Ignoring the love part, I really like Mc's intelligence and attitude. I also like that the future situation of the people he helps is explained partially with spoilers. I can't wait for the dancing street kids to grow up. I had high expectations for the love-hate story due to the comments, but I liked it better this way. Despite Mc's weaknesses, it is very nice that he compensates for his shortcomings with quick strategies during the war and The author's narrative gets better as the number of fight scenes increases. If you are hesitant about reading, I recommend you start immediately.

"So, how did you enjoy Robin's disguise?" Quinn grinned cheerfully.

"Unbelievable, you sang a song and dance you just though of. Good thing I recorded it live on Youtube," Lumine said.

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