This is probably the highest score that I've given to anyone. Like honestly, you deserve it. I'm starting to like the first person genres now that I've read yours. It almost makes me feel as if I'm reading Percy Jackson once again. Ahh... nostalgia hit me hard. Your writing has a kind of smooth flow to it, which I'm jealous about (you should teach me how to pull those off). The character design is awesome. And since we've come to characters, I must admit, the front cover looks sick! And you've given the details in an apt manner, or so to say, not too much nor not too little. I think this balance enhances your plot more. If I have to relate to your book, I would say, Sword art online written by Rick Riordan. Overall, I really enjoyed reading most of the chapters. Good luck!
