Out For Revenge - Reviews

I stoped at ch.9, I just couldn’t stand the banter between the system and him and the way the character keeps repeating how awesome he is. Good luck on the book Arthur, just not my cup of tea.

Pretty solid book realatively interesting and definitely worth while to read try it at the very least even if it isnt your normal type of book

Trial Read Review (only from synopsis):(IOHOSBICPAHTTP) - So this guy is in a world where this virtual game can merge with reality. He levels up one skill (the fireball, supposably) and it becomes super OP that it can literally blast a hole through the earth. Honestly, can’t see much potential in this one. It’s like any other virtual reality power and does not seem to have much diversity in its plot. This will have to go in my maybe read list.(1MTDBIABT) - Guy gets doomsday system one month before doomsday. This sounds like an interesting plot with some potential (I hope). All I wish for is it to not be like on of those trashy apocalyptic novels.I will put this on my read list for now.(MCCIE) - Guy dies then his conscience goes into an eyeball. It can evolve and whatnot and he gets OP. If I’m being honest about this novel, I’m not feeling good vibes. It sounds like one of those grindy novels with no actual plot. Oh well, I will check it out.(ICVCA) - Guy transmigrates but can see the stats of other humans. Whoopee do. What a fun plot (that definitely has not been used many times before). I honestly am sick of these types of novels. But who knows? Maybe this one will be good (not placing my bets on it).(OG:IAAPP) - This plot is basically like the first one excet that he gets the privileged player system which allows him to get more EXP and more things in general. I honestly can not get why so many writers follow this plot. It has been overused too many times. I will maybe read this one (if I get super bored).(EHFS) - Protag gets four skills. But so does everyone else. This is the synopsis. That’s all.(CC:ITWMS) - If you have read my reviews before, you will know I like sect/clan/company or whatever building novels. This is one of those except that he has his smartphone which can do many things. Google maps makes him see the terrain, banking system lets him exchange currency, ect. This is one I will definitely read.

Chapters are way too short even when there’s a warning for it. Feels way too rushed since chapters are so short, every six to seven chapter combined I’d say is equal too around 1500-1800 words.

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Wow it's a better story in our coming world...cheak anything more about the story I find nothing without a future situation moment as the author created it.

Hello author,Just finished the 7 chapters and the writing is pretty good. Please do you plan on continuing? ( i pray you do!!) It will be a shame to stop now ...snif snif.

I’ve been reading this for a long time, the amount of growth and improvement in the authors writing throughout the chapters is very  obvious. Includes plenty of popular fantasy and sci tropes but in a military setting which I haven’t seen before.

I believe I did a decent job with this, but I should be careful not to be overly confident. Overall, I feel it's quite good. I would appreciate it if everyone could leave a comment after each chapter or at least occasionally, so I can understand your thoughts on my story.

i am a girl,  Filipino,  13, kpop fan

"Why are you here to see Mr. Bold?" She asked, and Satan could detect a hint of petulance in her voice. Satan decided right then that no matter what happened, he was not going to flirt with this one. He looked over his shoulder at the door, considering a break for it.

Experience : + 3000 points.