2 stars for writing quality.the first difficult to understand because of the chaotic displacement of views in the novel. such as from the third view to the views of the main character and vice versa, and or from the view of the main character to the views of other characters and vice versa, and or the third view to the views of other characters and vice versa.second. too few signs to distinguish conversations, thoughts or narratives.2 stars for stability updates.first update unstable could be 1ch / day, 2ch / day, 3ch / day, 1ch / 2 days, and 3ch / 2 days.second. no notice about chapter update1 star for story development.first just follow the same story round get power, revenge / get conflict, finish it (beat / kill / embarrass), get new strength again, and re-repeat. without any plot twist.second. lack of explanation of what, who, where, why, and how at the core of each chapter.third. it seems that the author is very lazy to develop the storyline.1 star for character design.firstly very little explanation of the core character and finally as the story progresses it looks like a side character.second. some side characters disappeared without any explanation at all.third. looks like an author wants to keep his characters mysterious. but ultimately making the characters seem unimportant in the story because the author pointing that mindset of the main character is the core of the storyline.1 star for world background.world background is really bad. because the author is only concerned with the turn of the story that I mentioned in the development of the story.this is the review without mention the author's view.*my original language is not english. so forgive me if i am wrong with the english.
