This novel is absolutely fantastic with a total of 3k chapters. So far I have read till 1.8k chapters and am still hooked. Its not just about martial arts but how the martial arts system is constantly refined to become better. Only issue is the machine translation which makes it difficult to read.Is there a way where random people can edit the chapters that are translated with machine?
Author here!This review is going to be different than my first review.talking about the ratings above,•the writing quality: maybe average at the start but even there I have tried my best to deliver every sentence in a way that will be understandable for my readers!• the story development: is slow but you won't find many holes unless you are urging for one...lol. And if you are thinking that, "Oh another cultivation novel where the mc is gonna be getting treasures left and right and his training will end in the blink of an eye" then you are half right and half wrong.Also from the name of the novel, some may think that the end is known, then you are very wrong.• character design: hehe my fav part....the character story for every character won't take place on the spot...(like hi I am wu shi from the shi clan and I am this, while my dad is that and my fiancee is bla bla bla), "nope
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While he was absorbing the ring he was able to see a large black spider much similar to the one he had just fought. He went towards it and activated he devour skill. The spider let out a frenzied roar and did its last-ditch attack but that failed and was eventually absorbed by Tang San.
"I miss him you know" Yunki got startled and turned his head only to see his 'father' standing there who walks forward and sat beside him making him look away. "What are you doing here?" He asked scowling. "Can't I come to meet my sons?" This made Yunki scoff and he looked at the person who is suppose to be his father. "Don't pretend like you care about us. We all know that you never loved us and only wanted to use us for your own benefits." He spat making the man chuckle "Well you are not wrong. I did want to make you like me and guess what? I was successful" The smirk made Yunki almost pounce on the man and punch him hard. "Don't compare me with yourself. I am not like a monster like you." He growled. "You sure bout that?" The younger gritted his teeth trying to control his sudden building rage. His father smirked and looks in front. "I knew you would be here so I came here to tell you something." This made Yunki scoff sarcastically. Sure his father would never come just to meet him unless there is no benefit behind. "There is this man. Lee Mingyu. He lives in America but is coming tomorrow here in Seoul for five days. He has a pen drive which has some information against me which can cause a lot of loss to our company. What you need to do is get that pen drive from him. How you do it that's all on you but remember... to not get caught." "I am going back to Daegu for the mean time but will be back soon and once I will be here I want you to give me that pen drive." With that the elder man left from there leaving a furious boy behind. Even on this day this man is thinking about himself rather than his sons. He never was their father and never will be. He is just a man who ruined their life. Who has snatched everything from Yunki. His family, his happiness everything.
