Otsutsuki Ren : Reincarnation to Immortality - Reviews

This FF is literally for prople Who knows nothing of naruto. There is so many plot holes I cant even read this shi. He’s so weak bruv. How are you an Otsusuki but cant handle your own ****n chaKra when your chakra passively increases your own strength? Like what? Imagine have so much chakra but cant even fight? The author said hIs mother was gonna train him jus for hIm to just learn about his clan. i dont really think that counts as training. Go actually watch the show and stop writing this nonsense.

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my eyes bleed trying to read this, I feel my neurons burn trying to understand this... Delete this later from the account and for the sake of humanity never write again

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Stupid And Imposing Plot .  The naive and dimwitted MC judges everything based on the Naruto anime and manga he knows and easily believes in everyone he likes

I really enjoyed the story, since he's gaining followers he should give them the white karma and adopt them into his clan.So yeah so far so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Goood story

Good

Nice story!!!!
Pls continue!!!!!!!!!
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