Osiris - Reviews

Okay I'm going to be the first one to review this. The story is good but has to be better. And it only has 20 chapters if you can write more it would be better.

Wow off the bat,i amell a plot, we already have a love intRest/childhood besTfriend basically trying to sell the MC to a a basic death areNa,a motHer who cares mOre about herself than her Own son(MC),and a naive MC who saCrifices himself. alright hopefully his head will clear up and he will get his revenge

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Cole will have to do a lot of hard work,since Violet isn't a broken princess anymore....she is turned into a steel princess. This novel will cause a storm in this platform.............