Origin System - Reviews

Is it a harem?!? Pls be a harem!!
Is it a harem?!? Pls be a harem!
Is it a harem?!? Pls be a harem!!
Is it a harem?!? Pls be a harem!!
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I didn't read it you should say the type of system is an origin system. :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

Hay 1st and 2nd chapter is same please  do something about it
Also THE ORIGIN SYSTEM ON OTHER SYSTEM  REQUIRED is too good .
Keep up the good work also increase the post rate if possible.

continue this novel, it has a lot of potential, great character design and fast character development. I may get addicted to this

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Like it. Just need more updates. Or if you plan to stop working on it just let us know Please..........................................................

It seems alright, however the synnopsis was confusing, grammar mistakes, the characters don't feel at all real or unique and I don't really get the spark in reading where I expect something from it. A good attempt however and I wish you well in writing.