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trash stories with mc have too much power and don't have good control (for writers it's been good). even having a lot of power can't keep his mind from being read by others, well I suggest you guys don't read this garbage.oh in this novel there is another reincarnation as fubuki waifu mc and fubuki easily reads mc's mind and mc divulges his secret even though mc has a Rinnegan which is very strong in guardingoh in this novel there is another reincarnation as fubuki waifu mc and fubuki easily reads mc's mind and mc divulges his secret even though mc has a Rinnegan which is very strong in guarding mind so that it is not easy to read
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I dont get why everyone's writing random reviews so imma try. There are two witches watching two watches which witch watching which watch. Try saying that fast.
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writing is smooth only some mistakes wich are just not putting the talking indication or the
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It is still too early to judge yet but seems promising and despite the author claims that she need to improve her writings, I still think that it is good enough for an original of an author who just write as a hobby. I only hoped that she doesn't stop writing.
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I hate you, you got my hopes up talking about alchemy but it’s really just a monster factory novel. this is a disgrace to the word alchemy, alchemy should be classified as ether pill or potion concocting.Ok rant over, lol.
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We need answers.Was this novel dropped? Did you guys bail after taking the coins that we spent to unlock the chapters and gaining the privileges ???Is this over?
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Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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A different if not new take on the "reborn to live life over" genre, the MC was in his 50s before, a violent and villainous man unhappy with his life/how he got there. Upon awakening as his 10 year old self again he has be slowly adjusting to both getting to start over and have another chance at making his childhood better, and struggling with his violent temper and ***** sensibilities. This is compounded by his seemingly superhuman abilities, and notice of human scum around him that he was too niave to perceive the first time around. Add on to this the fact that the MC's love interest from his previous life is also revealed to the audience (thought not yet to the MC) to possibly be another reincarnation, or have some other story herself, possibly even setting her up to be a second protagonist/MC.This story seems it will deal with dark themes and follows an MC that does drastically violent deeds, especially when he is annoyed and has a deserving target to vent on, and as such may not be a good choice for those with a history of trauma. That said, this review is written early into its release and the plot is only beginning to be revealed. Many things have still yet to be revealed.The grammar/spelling could use an editor's touch, but is still better than some other books I have read here, even ones I spent SS on.
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Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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