I read the first 3 chapters but I introduced myself because this book just isn't for me but anyway you have a review of those first three chapters:The biggest flaw in novel is its failure to balance its elements. The writing swings between melodrama, forced action, and unearned moments of character introspection. The protagonist is a cardboard cut-out who reacts to events rather than actively engaging with them. There’s little sense of growth or change in him, and the story feels more like a string of random survival tropes rather than a cohesive narrative. The attempt at worldbuilding, with mysterious runes and a “magnetic dagger,” lacks any real substance and reads like a lazy attempt to create intrigue without earning it.If you’re looking for a well-crafted survival story with meaningful character development, emotional depth, and a compelling plot, this novel isn’t it. The emotional moments are clumsy, the action is lackluster, and the worldbuilding is shallow. This story needs a lot more focus, and a lot less melodrama, to become the kind of survival adventure it aspires to be.Anyway, for the author, don't take this review badly but as an example to improve, and I don't want to be too mean to the author so I'm giving it a 4⭐ and hope it gets better.
