Online Game: Starting with SSS-Rank talent - Reviews

The book tells a great story, typos aside. Please, please recall your muse and STOP TEASING US with one short chapter a day. I am beyond frustrated and exasperated by the lack of substantial reading material. It's time to bring this book to a close. It's been drawn out for far too long.

This MC is exceptionally arrogant and insecure, he truly has little redeeming qualities.                                                                                                                                          .

I’m not sure how this is so highly rated (4.4) at the time of writing this review.Readers’ standards just keep going down and down I guess.This novel is written by an author with the maximum level of ignorance possible. It makes for a laughable reading experience.The irony of it all is quite great.Good luck to those who take the plunge despite my advice not to.

This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

ce roman a un énorme potentiel ne laisser pas tomber cette fan fic svp  ce serait dommage ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

It's a little weird to me to be honest. It just feels weird reading the story; there isn't much description and a lot of the story is first person (which I dont have too many issues with). The english is pretty bad, but it's reasonable considering the author's first language isn't english. However, his English just ruins it for me though an editor might be able to fix this issue.

But all of that doesn't matter now, as the kid took on a mission to investigate a strange incident of disappearances that have been going on for a while with no clear clues thus when he saw the chance he took it to know what happened but I never thought that I will feel just like that time before that white figure appeared.

"Agh, Is everyone alright!" Justin screams

It sounds interesting. I'll be looking forward to how it developes.

Please update

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

The temperature drops rapidly and all the Straw Hats save for Chopper and so while everyone goes to get their coats Luffy and Itachi simply wait it out as Luffy doesn't realise its cold and isn't bothered by it and Itachi decides to use an old ANBU trick to warm himself up. By covering his body in a thin layer of Chakra he insulates his body heat instead of it being released into the atmosphere.