One Day I Woke Up With an Achievment System - Reviews

So far so good as you mentioned it'd be a fun project. But need to work on punctuation and create more conversation between characters to not feel like two dimensional.  especially when colt interacted with Clara it was so fast and it'd not look good in the long run.

Waiting for more..

First ever book written so let me know if it’ good or not probably won’t be the best thing in the entire world but hope it is good enough for all of u to enjoy!

Good and simple story. Really enjoyed reading it.