Once Human, Now a Parasite β - Reviews

Its an ok story, if the goddamn girlfriend filler chapters were cut out it would be way better. Holy crap sometimes i wonder if the author is obessed with trying to make it seem like young romance. Why does half the chapter have to be texts between the mc and his girl?!?! Jesus Christ he even describes the emojis! You can just look at the chapters name and if it sounds like his girl is a part of it just skip it as nothing interesting happens. This novel is so full of nonsense its not even funny. A sadly watered down story that vividly describes emojis is my final say.Thank you for reading my rant btw?

Not many sport story can hook me. So congrats. Not only that, i never saw a basketball story so it is a plus. However, the writing quality suck, but its ok since it is yours first time so i cant go hard on you. story development is ok but still can be improve  and i cant say anything about world background since u use real earth as the background. All in all, for a first story by new writer, u have good idea for the story and this make up with ur poor writing. i wish you luck.

good but                                longmin great

I like it a lot  ............................................................... ...........................................................

A realistic harryBut tone down the violenceAnd make him so he make money cause he cant rely on his family's (potter) wealth(what if its draining faster than he can earn)Like both wizard and muggle's currencyAnd tune down the violenceAnd killingBut kill them without people knowing and the one where he kill his aunt and uncle is very suspicios if wizard ministry knowsIt should be like they died in a car accident(all of them) so the money is going to fall into harryLike writing the paper thing or what to do with their money after their death like half of it is donation and half to harry (just like what u did author but its in the will paper thing)Cause outright transferring them(money) before their death is suspiciosAnd if invistigated right (by the one against potter)then he's doom ... or something

the translation is meh.. and the progress pf the story is sluggish.its remind me of the grabekeeper from the gisa pyramide but as a really cheap rip-off

The amount of disrespect and utter garbage that is in this novel is truly surprising considering it's Asian origins. I thought Asians had great respect for their ancestors.

Very solid xianxia novel, despite the fact that it's 2022 already. Sets the mood with some of the best parts from the classic cliche xanxias but with a spin (thus avoiding cliches). Has family management, as if it's "Protect Our Patriarch" but more in-line with action xianxia vibes such as "Demon's Diary". World building is decent and has some interesting things going on in background.MC is likeable and strong in character, overall am really satisfied with his reactions, behavior and how he handles situations. Conversation flow is also decent. The world doesn't revolve around MC so far, the author could put him as a third-party, a bystander that just happened to be at a place of conflict of 2 other parties. Bonus points for not being dragged into mess or chased down because of that! MC is not bullied by his family or anything which is quite surprising because the world is portrayed as being quite dark (slaves, backstabbing, wars, sacrifices..).Nowadays there are barely any good cultivation novels, and even if there are (e.g. "Cultivation: My Augmented Statuses"), they follow the newer trends with systems and so on. This one doesn't have a system, really feels as if going back in time (back to before webnovel site appeared) and finding a gem in the xianxia genre. The cheat is quite subtle as well.I have over 1200 titles on my account and have seen most of the ol' and new xianxias. The 40 chapters presented seem really intriguing, developing steadily, worth my time. I'll most likely dig into MTL in the next days. Cheers!

interesting story but the writing and gramma is a little lacking, so if you dont mind the occasional broken sentence you will enjoy this novel!

Ignore the tags, only the system one is real, there is no harem, yaoi, weak mc, ntr, or (at least to my knowledge) any plagiarism.This is a world designed solely by the author, and all the characters (well, those that matter) are likable; the grammar is rarely incorrect and the story is quite enjoyable.Those tags are just fake and leave me wondering who wastes their time vandalising someone else's hard work ?.

And then it happened. The bombers finally dropped the first of their payloads, and the first one dead was Trace. Without a single chance to fight, a chance to do anything, he was dead.

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