ONCE BETRAYED: TWICE RECLAIMED - Reviews

This Novel is quite good but they should now stop spamming this this type of story.Story is interestingMC cheat allow him change his beast's bloodline e.t.cranking system in this Novel is quite ez to understand.I definitely recommend this book.

This story is not only really well written but also contains a great storyline that hold many twists and turns. It is definitely worth a read.

Nice story.. A normal MC got lucky become OP then become overly confident and then learn the lesson then start again.. It's like giving a second chance.. Standing after falling.. Nice story so far..  Keep it up.. I really like to read this thru the end not just vanish thru thin air.. :)

Ask anyone and they will tell you about how funny this story is but there is so much more to it than humour. The author constructs a world that seems real, everyone has their own motivations almost no one is just a side character. You understand these characters, you feel sad for them and sometimes you see yourself in these characters. This story has brought me many times to the verge of tears, sometimes it’s for a side character that gets rarely mentioned in the story. It is so much more than just funny characters and interesting events. This story isn’t aimless, there’s a goal to be had and we follow this journey as if we’re the ones taking it. Read it, you will not regret it

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  Seeing how they probably won't get anywhere anytime soon, Yua decides, "How about we do a 2 vs 1? Sitting here will only give you blank thoughts." Excitement fills their eyes. They've never had a chance to go up against a real Chibushi before. The only battle experience they've had were against other students. Like practicing a sport, most kids would spar with their parents in order to train for battle experience. But since their circumstances don't allow them to do so, it is quite an exciting event. Yua takes a few steps back into the center of the circle. And gives them instructions. "Your goal for the rest of the day is to try to tag me. You can use whatever skill or tool, against me, but I promise you that any attack from either of you will be like trying to destroy a mountain by taking out one grain of dirt at a time. A word of advice, try to think on your feet and outside of the box. If you don't use something innovative, then you won't be able to catch me. I won't be using Chi or my full strength, but don't expect it to be an easy task. Good luck!"

I highly recommend reading this novel and here's why:It's writing quality is at a professional level and it makes the reading quite enjoyable. It's clear and non reiterative. This author's creativity is also off the charts!It completely exceeded my expectations!For anyone out there trying to find a good read, this is definitely worth the while.(as a plus, you won't end with less neurons after reading it)

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I love giving 5's to promising novels. The idea is unique and has a lot of potential. I hope you could proofread it in the future as that's the only concerning thing I found while reading.

honestly the story is good and the writer is quiet talented too , but there were a some plot holes such as when the mc left to adventure he was undercover and only the guild master recognised him , and then left to slay the dragon , meanwhile Lancelot found his aura at the crime scene ( idk man black tech , helps you know the owner of the aura , how it works ? not explained ) and somehow and with no further lead he kind of went where the mc is ,how he knew his location ? not explained , saw him fighting the dragon , used a spell (he's a swordman who can use mana and divinity ,which is unbalanced) that teleports the enemy against his will from miles away , how it works ? not explained then he made a barrier that made him invincible , how it works ? not explained if you read the above you'll get my first point : only a little is explained.my second point is how inconsistent the story is , for example  lancelot crossed the distance between 2 nations in a day and a half max , while in the 'castle attack' arc the duchess didn't call the Duke to come because it'll take a week ? ,i mean the distance was 20 kilometers and he was far more powerful than Lancelot so shouldn't he cross it in an 2 hours max ?

New book, please support. Do keep in mind that this is an African inspired book that is entirely fictional .. .. .

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