On the day when the tagger goes blind - Reviews

A slightly different time travel and transmigration story, this one is for sports lovers. I say different because MC travels of a different geography (England) with which he has little familiarity. Moreover, MC had never been an actual manager in his previous life, so he had no experience (he only watched a lot of soccer games as a "fan"). He does have "information about the future

Overall, this is quite an enjoyable read. The writing is understandable although there are rare instances where there are mistakes. The story develops at a nice rate and the character design is pretty good as well. I personally, don't like having to read about all the races at the beginning, but that's just me. Overall, its a great novel and keep doing you thing it seems like its gonna work out for you.

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interesting plot which is differently unique which I respect. The wording is lengenthy  and this goes to its advantage as it explores the nature of corruption and this prison

Story soubds interesting but sadly its MTL that is not edited . Its really ruins the story. Mc meets new Ppl first they are 2 Women and later 1 . He leaves his sister behind at home and later she is at his new sect. It is really a Pain.

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Tang San shook his head helplessly, "Little Qing, don't be like that. I have prepared backup herbs for all of you, so don't worry about not being chosen."

You use "Molly" for both the girl and the reinka several times.You really are good at pacing, even down times are interesting.

          Blanche Farms was a normally sublime place, where an elderly gentleman lived out his days with his aging wife. They had servants who would tend to the farm and villagers would occasionally lend a helping hand. Known for their clean wool, they had been major suppliers to the fabric industry.

Uniforme do Aprendiz Atributos : +1 SORTE, +1 DEFESA.

Equipment: Magic Flare Pistol (Legendary??? Weapon), Leather Pants, White Plain Shirt, Black Sunglasses, Leather Armor, Leather Boots.