on my weeding dress - Reviews

It seems alright, however the synnopsis was confusing, grammar mistakes, the characters don't feel at all real or unique and I don't really get the spark in reading where I expect something from it. A good attempt however and I wish you well in writing.

This is actually awesome if i could id love to trade places with the main character the story seems promissing and the premisse as well i just hope it keeps getting better

A perfectly evil and twisted MC done right                                                                                                                                                                                                         

The MC behavior is like he was born in a royal family rather than a cultivation one. Cultivation family would give you more freedom if you are the strongest. Just look at the Ye family. The current strongest isn't the head of the family. He focus on his cultivation. A royal family would want the strongest be in command.

Yes there are mechanical/grammar errors. There are always errors in every story. Don't let them distract you from the genuinely entertaining tale.I hope you like details! Because DETAILS ABOUND. How many chapters are dedicated to the character creation menu? MORE THAN YOU'D THINK. But I still found it interesting, in a munchkin way. It's human nature to maximize.I want more, and am eagerly awaiting the next updates.

First of all, I was pleasantly surprised by the grammar. There was barely any mistakes, and the diction was advanced and allows readers to visualize the world easily. It reminds me of classic DnD fantasy with modern touches. I'm looking forward to the story, keep it up!

nice story to read this is the series of horror story which can be read very quietly its really a nice story to read lets enjoy this story as

Eternal supreme of all cultivation with leveling system novel. In china alone 10 million readers everyday waiting for the updated chapters. Very unique. The author actually like to write myriad world system novels and I am not a fan of his other works.The translator here is a transcendent being in translation, every words used are well-selected and zero flaws. Fellow daoist and cultivators, we should  donate for the hard work of our eternal translator.

  I know that very well, but I still felt bad about it. At that moment my head was struggling with my desire. And as much as I wanted to follow my head, I admit that my desire was winning.

Another voice was heard on inside the room,she looked around but she couldn't find the person talking. But she that voice,in her past life,she grew up with that voice close by her side everyday, they went through ups and down together,that voice taught her magic,that voice was her adviser,her right hand, her best friend. But she couldn't trace where the voice was coming from. She didn't know when tears started rolling down her cheeks, it was until she felt something wet on her,that she notice she has been crying. So she decidedto call out the name .

"Well, we could go through one of the alley ways and jump into one of those big green rubbish bins." suggested Teru.

Pakai cara yang aneh buat ngobatin luka sampe bikin orang salah paham. Dasar licik!