Omniscient reader's viewpoint [eng] - Reviews

As of Chapter 49Writing Quality: 5/5No visible mistakes were seen. (My english might not be the best so take it with a pinch of salt all you grammer nazis)Story Development: 5/5A relatively light hearted story in my own opinion. This story has a theme seen by most light novel readers. However, the light heartedness of the story carries teally nicely despite there being a little gore in some areas. A relatively easy read.Character Design: 3/5A typical aloof MC. There is nothing out of the ordinary about the MC so far. However, the MC stays true to his role and does not do anything out of character thus far. (OP and aloof MC). Not much is seen in the side characters as there is little to no depth in them. They feel very surface level (if you get what i mean).Updating Stability: 5/5I jist binge all 48 chapters so i am assuming that this novel has daily releases. World Background: 3/5A typical chinese fantasy theme as a world background. Nothing outstanding seen so far.Overall: 4.2/5I would consider this a novel to pick up and run with. There seems to be alot of potential in this novel. However, this novel is fairly light hearted and not for those who enjoy grimdark. This novel can be considered more of a easy read type novel. The main issue with this novel (why it has a low score) is due to the lack of chapters which will be solved in the future.  Will do a future review once there are more chapters

The story was good until chapter 120 where the MC had a 180 turn and became a complete different individual for no apparent reason. MC just became toxic and all the previous relationships he had was just ignored

Reading the name I thought it'd be all about the protag but I'm loving how each chapter is unfolding with a lucid description of each character. The realisticity is awfully intriguing. And our author is very much into super long sentences I see ?

'So, how will this form work? I'll need to be masked for my time at Beacon...or not go to Beacon at all. My hair seems to be able to change between previous colors—except brown—so I can definitely say I'm Corcra's sister, or some sort of relative. Ozpin, considering the fact that he's fine with launching teenagers to possible death, probably has Corcra's blood. Since I have Blood Destruction, we should be close enough in similarities to at least be cousins or something...'

"James Stone Mr mayor " James introduced himself

Gray rushed towards them and swung down his sword while he was still quite a distance away. The one on the left was confused as to why but he soon realized as he saw the sheath fly out and hit his neighbor right in the head with such strength that he was immideatly knocked out. He truned back to look at Gray and saw him rushing closer towards him. He swung both sords aiming at the neck in an x form. However both swords where blocked by a single sword in the intersection of the short blades.

As I rise my body up, I noticed an unfamiliar package lying in the corner of my room.

"Can you show me the screen of the entrance of the Ladies Dormitory?" I asked and they did. I had to ask them to go out because I need to see it for myself. At 10:36 pm, the guards left their post to patrol around the dormitory to make sure that no one is lurking around after curfew and at 10:46 pm, it's clear that Hera went out of the dormitory. I picked up the pace but in the middle of watching, there's a glitch at exactly 11:57 pm and that's when I saw a man carrying... Hera! I was waiting for him to come out but the screen turned black but the camera is still on. It's still recording. I called a staff to help me fixed it but they were also puzzled about the sudden glitch of the screens.

Jess shrugged. "Luke, you've got to take a chance on this. Tell her."

(you're registered to the system)

He could not help but suspected that Sister Ye must have some weakness that Fan Tian Yi could be holding against her. If not, why would she give in to his demands?

I lean over and whisper to Liam, "are you okay? What was that about?"