Omniscient First-Person’s Viewpoint (272 onwards NO MTL TRANSLATION) - Reviews

Raw Title: 我有一群地球玩家Status: 885 Chapters (Ongoing)Story is similar to other novel in which a game is developed and later players enjoy the game. This novel is based on Sci-fi theme.  By seeing the chapter it can be guessed that in few chapters, the game world will be exposed to real world (~100 chapters).

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Nice start! Your grammar and writing style are all top-notch! The synopsis was very interesting and hooked me on. Good job author! Keep it up!

It's too early to say that the book is really good. Yet, it is good so far with its character development and slow yet impactful pacing. I'm giving it the benefit of a doubt. I hope that it really gets better.

"But why?"

That got him in the bad books of every girl present...at least he had the decency to stay with her till she woke up But for Hinata it was different

"I already calculate this."

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Aku melawan raja itu dan sepertinya pertahanan dia sudah mulai terbuka lagi jadi aku bisa menyerangnya dengan bebas dan dia juga cukup hebat dalam bertarung jarak dekat aku hampir kewalahan melawanya kalau aku lengah sedikit dia mungkin sudah melumatkan aku.

Shivering, her grip on Mo Shuai's coat tightened. Seeing the girl in his arms shaking, he took off his coat and enveloped her up like a burrito.

You'll never shine if you don't glow