Oliver and the Magic Academy - Reviews

WOW!!! How is this story not in the top 100 yet?!?!?!?!For the first time in my life I literally ejaculated just by reading this erotic novel. I love the pacing of the story, the sensory scenes, the character development, and the wise things the MC says. I feel so emotionally attached to his main harem and I love how hard he is trying to make them happy. This novel is definitely in my top 10 and I recommend it to anyone that likes a good ero-novel. Please keep writing more chapters!BTW, I DON'T CARE WHAT ANYONE SAYS, LI LIAN IS THE BEST GIRL!

This novel has no ending, don't read if you don't want to be disappointed.

Story so far has been really good, looking forward to when it's fully released. More chapters pls More chapters pls More chapters pls More chapters pls

Summary - The concept is interesting, worth giving a try. Overall it's a solid 4 stars. There are grammatical mistakes but they are within an acceptable range, the pacing is slow but it has only been 12 chapters.Overall too early to judge anything except the concept, which feels like a solid 5 star.

This doesn't have any consistency and can can be very confusing to the reader such as how or when did the MC get that weapon/item or power etc.

I gotta say, the title was already good and the synopsis was well written.. It makes one want to continue reading.. Alright, I'll be rooting for this one !!

Can't continue pàst ch3.. just bad writing.No description for scenes, incoherent flow of events, no characterisation, and downright mtl level dialogue writing author has a very rudimentary understanding of writing and the language in general, should really focus on it if he wants to continue in this... at the very least check for the grammar before posting through a proofreader

ANNOUNCEMENT:THERE WILL BE NO UPDATE TONIGHT AND TOMORROW NIGHT SINCE I HAVE TO FINISH SOMETHING RELATED TO WORK BUT THERE WILL BE A MASS RELEASE THIS SUNDAY, 8-10 CHAPTERS FOR COMPENSATION.SORRY GUYS! I REALLY HAVE TO FINISH THIS ONE FIRST, I HOPE YOU WILL UNDERSTAND. I can only post it here since i can no longer post announcement using inkstone because my contractor already locked my novel and i do not want you to waste SS for the sake of reading my announcement...

Some tried to take a picture stealthily but for some unknown reason, their phone or camera suddenly broke on its own as in their screen goes cracked completely...

*Bang*

"I... I have been.. you know,  watching you from behind. Is something bothering you?"

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