OBSESSED: SECRET ATTRACTION - Reviews

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I either under a very powerful illusion spell or I'm not even on earth anymore.

Lau paused as he turned to Lovell; Luna pondered in words before asking him, "Lau, what are the racial crowns?"

"I have never seen anything like that. Judging from its size, it should be a mid-tier spirit beast."

Setibanya di Ancient jeveline Sekte, Old Sun langsung menuju ke halaman pribadinya untuk memastikan keadaan cucunya, saat memasuki ruangan bersama El, tiba-tiba masuk seorang wanita cantik memakai baju zirah yang megah dan mempesona, keindahan yang mengguncah dunia.

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-Shouldn't that be normal though?

"I'm here, Sasha. So, please... Don't cry. Please, smile for me." He whispered.

I actually nearly cried in the first chapter but think the do-over system is great .imagine if we had that. :)anyways I love you book and writing. please keep updating

Don't bother reading this story. From random periods to very long sentences. Just from chapter 1 you can tell no work was put into this story. It is like a really, really rough draft

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The story is fantastic. Definitely a 10 out of 10 there. The character building and Arc is also definitely a 10 out of 10. World building again 10 out of 10. The English on the other hand, well it's not very good. Regular misspellings and incorrect words being used. With that being said it's not hard to understand what the author was trying to say most of the time. Dont expect the story to follow any scientific laws whatsoever though. Also while the fights are very enjoyable to read, it's almost as if a teenager is describing an anime fight not anything that would be done in real life a lot of times. With all this being said I absolutely love the story and would definitely recommend it. Overall I would score this novel a 9 out of 10. Its truly enjoyable to read, and very descriptive so it's easily visualized by the reader.