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Novam : The veil beyond prequel
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Basically this is America or somewhere not in china. But somehow is like China. MC gained a OP ability that is close to omniscient or Omnipresent, he uses it to take revenge but not how to cure is vegetables state girlfriend. He thinks that having enough physical strength put him above everyone. This novel setting is in the Modern Era and yalk know that in the Modern Era no matter how strong you are physically you cant beat somehow with Money and Influence. He also cheated on his girlfriend. Doesnt matter what excuse he give, he still cheated on his girlfriend. The World Background of this novel is very lacking Character design is very lacking as well. Story development is lacking as wellIdk care about the updating stability because i dropped this abomination Translation is very trash as well.
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Wow. Name changes every chapter. The MC sometimes acts like a transmigrant, sometimes a native. Some sentences wholly make no sense. Translations sucks, and MC doesn’t even know if the original body of his actually committed the crime.
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The translation is too bad and the book is not readable. I won't say this if the translation was bad still could understand the story, but the translation makes it so bad that the book changes the name of the same person multiple times.
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Very good story .I love the MC 's character This story is full of twist and has very good potential .Need more chapters author .good work ..
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Door to door, house to house, the three passed visited the houses by the streets and did their "Trick or Treat". As the ghost, the mummy, and the witch went on, the cadies within the basket grew until it was nearly full. Since the night was still young, the mummy guard asked the two if they want to visit the park. When the witch senior nurse asked the ghost girl with white eyes, the girl agreed. The park was not that far and it was good to rest after walking. Reaching the park, stalls and decorative lights brightened up the scene. Though the girl could not see colors, it was still a beautiful new sight to her. The witch senior nurse spots sweets which looked like apples being sold. Saying that she was going to buy some, the witch senior nurse left. Meanwhile, the two walked towards a bench. As the ghost girl sat, the mummy guard asked the girl if it would be alright if he leaves for a short moment. The ghost girl asked why and the mummy guard responded that he wanted to go to the restroom. When the ghost girl looked at the stall selling candy apples, she could see the witch senior nurse waiting in line. Not minding it, the ghost girl told the guard that he could go. Again, the mummy guard asked if it would be alright since he knew her condition, but the ghost girl gave the same answer. Before trailing off, the mummy guard told the girl not to move from her seat. And so, the ghost girl was left alone sitting on the bench. Looking at her basket, the ghost girl took a candy and unwrapped it. As the ghost girl popped it inside her mouth, she tasted the sweetness burst. The ghost girl looked around and she could see enjoyment within the people's faces. It was all black and white, but she had grown accustomed to it.
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Ryan searched for words, but Peter wasn't finished.
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Had Prime looked further on, the scene she would've seen was of savagery. There was the flesh of a mermaid divided into pieces at the sides of the bonfire in the middle of the camp. Every once in a while, the tender mermaid meat would make crisp sounds because of the heat eminating from the fire. The scent it carried was different from the other edible food that humans usually ate. At the middle of the fire was a mermaid's head[4]. There was immense horror, disgust, and hatred depicted in the eyes of the mermaid as it's head was pierced into a javelin. The javelin stood tall, the fierce wind made the mermaid's hair flutter, it carried with it the scent of death.
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"just hilda"
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Your sister was really the most beautiful person I have ever seen. Not even someone like I could compare to her. She even made me question my sexuality.
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The Snake just liked shiny things, and the Wolf thought if used in battle, the horn could be a fearsome weapon.
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God I'm pathetic. I'm dating a married woman. That's like the lowest of the low. Maybe I should watch some more Batman, that always cheers me up. I grab the Batman Returns Blu Ray and what should normally be impossible happens. As I press the open button for the Blu-ray player spark start to emit from the player then all of a sudden a large explosion engulfs me and half of the living room. I die on impact. No one will find my body until tomorrow, when Amy comes.
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"Really!? You guys sure work fast" asked Cram

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