Non perfection - Reviews

Awesome characters liked the story progression up until the ryoji temple arc because it seemed to be so rushed, all the guys should have been taken to the temple and the girls taken in as ninja possibly made allies that way. overall a great genre to take inspiration from just need a d&d type board game to run so many possibilities and roll with the best story but no matter how you look at it having time to mature a storyline is always best concerning quality other than that loved the immersive storytelling great job authorsan. ??

The poor English at the start was a little off putting, but it gets a lot better very quickly and the story more than makes up for it. Great series and I look forwards to reading it to the end.

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The characters are good and the story is nice.But the world is very badly created.The author hardly talks about the world, just follows the protagonist's life, doesn't care about anything about it.

47 (2002/08/19) #

Lily was complaining about having to take Studio 3 art before AP Art History. "I mean, why does it even matter? It's not like I'm learning anything currently that will disrupt my understanding of who painted such-and-such..." she ranted on and on.

"W-what?" She asked.

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"It's not that stupid. In fact, I still want to have this conversation with you." Looking at the meaningful Eysan, this beautiful woman's wet hair and exotic appearance could not even affect Yun after those words.

"Gue jemput, jangan naik bus dulu," pesan dari Irfan.

[Mind Mastery Lv.2]

"The boat for the academy leaves tomorrow afternoon. Your bike will be brought along so that you can get around easier." Braham spoke as he gave Raiden a card and a folded document, "This is your driver's licence. Try not to go over speed limits too much."