NOCTURNE REQUIEM - Reviews

I'm lazy, but his novel is very good,. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

This story starts a bit slow with the character already 'developed' in game. So unlike a lot of other similar stories you don't have to sit through the early levels. The only thing that sticks out to me is that at this point I can't really see where it is going. The MC has motivations but they are just kind of tiptoed around.

Just an examination of the writer's style.There's a frequent lack or overuse of punctuation that makes sentences flow awkwardly. The author's sentence structuring and wording, in general, can also create a strange read at times.However, grammatical errors are minimal, and to give credit where credit's due, the Author has an exceptional vocabulary and word sense. This prevents them from overdoing one of my biggest irks with novels on the site, rapidly overusing the same words in a small area of text.An example of what I mean would be, "The other boys were going to attack but the leader stood up gesturing to not attack." This example was ripped straight out of a fairly popular novel.

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Mia-san went over to check how Uki-chan was doing.

Wait… why am I thinking about him again? Ugh, I should really go out and date. I shouldn't stay in these four corners of my office for 12 hours and six times a week.

Hehehe... I think he's mad.

"War?"

I said as I turned to face him, he turns towards me and he gently moves his hands to my face. I leaned into his hand, wanting more love. He pulls me in and we both fall into each others embrace my arms locked around his neck, and he wraps his arms around my waist. He moves his hand onto my neck and pulls me into a passionate kiss.

'Eeww...Hes here, and look at that guy, hes so nervous, if hes that nervous he shouldn't be here' replied by the girls friend.

"Yeah. I already have one though." Alex replied as she stood up from the chair. "My package arrived. There's something for you as well."

"what are you doing!!!, and who are you talking about I'm not sohpie and i don't even know you!" after seeing those anger reaction itsuki ask for forgiveness " I'm sorry for mistake you for a wrong person i thought you are her, anyway I'm leaving and i really sorry for hugged you don't worry i will never talk to you again so goodbye." itsuki back to normal which is cold and vulnerable