no hope..... until you - Reviews

*coughs confidently*This the original by me :I want to be the very best,Like no one ever was.To tame them is my real test,To train them is my cause!(I will travel across the land,Searching far and wide.Each Astral Beast to understandThe power that's inside!)Astral Beast!!!Gotta tame em' all!It's you and me,I know it's my destiny!Astral Beast!!!Oh, you're my best friend,In a world we must defend!Astral Beast!!Gotta tame em' all!(A heart so true,Our courage will pull us through!)You teach me and I'll teach you,Astral Beast!!!Gotta tame em' all!Gotta tame em' all!Every challenge along the way,With courage I will face!I will battle every day,To claim my rightful place!Come with me, the time is right,There's no better team with a system!!Arm in arm, we'll win the fight,It's always been our dream!Astral Beast!!!Gotta tame em' all!It's you and me,I know it's my destiny!Astral Beast!!Oh, you're my best friend,In a world we must defend!Astral Beast!!!Gotta tame em' all!(A heart so true,Our courage will pull us through!)You teach me and I'll teach you,Astral Beast!!!Gotta tame em' all!Gotta tame em' all!Gotta tame em' all!Gotta tame em' all!Gotta tame em' all!Astral Beast!!!Gotta tame em' all!It's you and me,I know it's my destiny!Astral Beast!!!Oh, you're my best friend,In a world we must defend!Astral Beast!!!Gotta tame em' all!(A heart so true,Our courage will pull us through!)You teach me and I'll teach you,Astral Beast!!!Gotta tame em' all!Gotta tame em' all!ASTRAL BEAST!!!- BY  LORD_OF_ORIGIN

This is just frustrating to read. First, all of the character names are mismatches of someone google searching "top 20 American first names" and "top 20 American last names". It is super frustrating to read when every single character has a name that I would expect to see as a place holder on a police report involving minors. Second is that it absurdly draws out conflicts. It is a constant seesaw between the MC getting harassed and then getting some form of minor revenge. There is also an absurd focus on side characters, even their POVs, considering we can be sure they aren't going to play any major role outside of the current conflict they are involved in with the MC. Speaking of conflict, this is another majorly frustrating aspect. The MC is described as a hardworking, kind, and loyal man. The entire novel is just him being defecated on repeatedly.

i love it.. the story' is stable but not boring.. easy to understand and easy to make me jelouse with main characters.. so invisible like the theme..

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The story or book is good but very poor translation that i couldn't continue reading. Did the author ever thought of translating this book afresh? Does webnovel help the authors translate their work? if yes why not help with this book. Am really looking forward to a new translated version

Muy bueno y todo pero, ¿ en algun momento dejas de decir Matthew en cada oracion? Matthew Matthew Matthew Matthew Matthew Matthew Matthew Matthew Matthew Matthew Matthew Matthew

Thank you for everyone whose reading this book, I hope you`re enjoying it.  I just want to give myself a 5 star just to encourage myself to do better haha.

This novel has a lot of things that I didn't like:- Poor grammar in the initial chapters that improves after the first volume. - There's no consistency in the power levels, Mc is losing a fight that he should be winning for the sake of some bad drama and suspense that culminates with a power up, or Mc loses against someone in one chapter and the next one wins against a stronger character than the last one.- The romance is poorly set up, there isn't   a look in depth or some previous interactions, the story just jumps at their entrance to the harem, but to be fair this is the less annoying thing overall. - There's no consistency in the Mc's thoughts, words and actions.

Nayuta : oh it's nothing

Me:yeah and it's called se..

Sia was left in room with her friends Hannah and Kate. They both went near to her. " Please leave me alone." She said wiping her tears.