Nights With the Fools [HIATUS] - Reviews

Hi... do you remember me? *blush* I wasn't expecting to see you again in this place... is your house nearby...may I stop by *blush*

hmm, sorry.
I hope Larry does not become the type of person who will risk his own life to save a stranger, regardless of whether he will be neutral or a psychopath due to what happened to him.

The story is excellent and exciting, making me enjoy the plot throughout the chapter. However, the lack of a description of the world is a deficiency, in my opinion, whereas the interactions between the characters are very entertaining.

Interesting character plot. I like how Larry is Calm and reads the situation quickly. I'm just confused of the character's looks but apart from that everything else is cool. Keep writing author San.

This is a story about Larry, 22 years old. He would be having this weird dream as I mentioned in the synopsis. And for the explanation's sake, he will be playing this game which happens in his dream with his newly-found companion, Garry.

I participated in WSA-2022 under the SYSTEM category. Pretty late in the game, I would say. So obviously, there will be a system, but it won't be an RPG-style system that shows your stamina, strength, etc. I'm too lazy to explain that here, so I suggest reading the story if you wish to know.

And since I only uploaded it now, I don't have any expectations of winning. But if you like it, you might wanna support me.

There won't be cheats. I mean, there will be, but it's too small you might not even notice it.

No harem, romance, and the likes. Like, dude! He'll be fighting for his life! He won't have time to flirt.

And if you're gonna ask me if he's going to be OP, like, he can destroy the world with just a sneeze type of OP, sorry to disappoint you. He haven't been working out before he participated in this so-called survival game. But he's not an idiot I'm telling you. So don't expect him to choose a banana over a knife when a murderer is after him. He won't be that dumb.

The game is called, "Nights with the Fools".

I think that's about it. Did I miss anything?

Whatever!

Just comment your question in case I've forgotten something.

Author, this is a compelling story. I love Larry and Garry.  Your characters are well developed and the world around them. They are living, breathing and claiming their world. Great world building!

I have seen a Black Mirror episode with a similar plot but without the teddy. The teddy is so unique. So I can definitely see this story as TV series or an anthology.

Please continue to write. Great job so far!

Excellent dream world with a gaming theme. I am thrilled to read this book. Pacing is cool. The storytelling method is simple and attractive. Waiting for next chapters...

The story draws you in at the first part, and immidately when it starts, potential is seen in this book.

this book is amazing. it has a great start that draws you in and the author tells the story from the best perspective. I can not wait to see what happens next good job author keep it up.

With only two chapters, I really can't tell that much yet, but the beginning is intriguing enough to anticipate more for the upcoming chapters. ,author has good writing skills, keep it up.

First I'm good to say great work author, I really like the book title and the synopsis was captivating too, even though the book is still in it early stage, the chapters were well written and I can already tell that the book has great potential. so keep up the good work author, keep updating.

I don't know what to say, even thought the story has just started, the potentiel I see in it, is just great! does anyone like my house of horrors? then this will be up your ally.
I noticed that the author also knows how to write a chapter, there was no error as far as I noticed!
and finaly, I am sure that you will enjoy this, so support the author, and may he have good luck with the wsa!

Nice title of your story. Your story is really good. The plot is strong. characters are well managed. on the whole, I like your story. keep it up.

Read till chapter 2 so far, and I can already tell the story is great! It's very entertaining since the writing quality is very good. A few error in tense but it's almost invisible to notice since it goes with the flow when it comes to reading. I also liked the fact that the author isn't aiming to win WSA, but rather to share his fantasy story to the world. So keep it up author you're doing great! And best of luck too