Nightmare,Son of the Abyss - Reviews

It has an interesting premise with the mc being a deal with the devil type character. The cover art looks amazing as well. The only problem I had with it was the grammar making it a bit hard to read.

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A very good book that has a lot of potential. However, the first three or four chapters have some visible grammatical mistakes. After that everything clears up. Really looking forward to more chapters!

More yuri is needed but I can see why the last chapter is called pity and regrets?. Also where is the system? Anyways I wish there were more stories with succui?

Excellent story. It's definitely a read if.you are fantasy/ video game fan. The author does a fantastic job of bringing the dark genre to our world.

Author here; thank you to everyone who’s supporting the work, I’ve been AFK for a long time but now I am back, and I will continue to upload daily, much as possible.

Rewriting a review - this chapter and the twist were huge. Every little detail and the build up were so thought out but unexpected enough I believe to have a massive effect. Nice nice nice.

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Izan's body appeared in front of Voldemort, and as he appeared, Voldemort's outreached hand that was holding the wand was falling to the ground.  

I quickly fired several web netting towards the crowd of ninjas to help restrict their movement before delivering a powerful side kick towards one of the ninja's chest. The impact send the ninja flying backward like a cannon ball and he smashed into the large group of ninjas like they are bowling pins.

Ehh, boss I was telling you everything I while ago but your not listening. "Scratch his head"

First, he had to kill a few important people. The target that he was originally going to kill Borick, Sinbad decided to send out a clone to deal with him and his Rakshasa Demons. Next target is Syura and his group Wild Hunt. Sinbad was going to deal with them himself as he stormed the Capital. The one after Syura would be Budo who would be in the heart of the palace. Sinbad would kill him by himself also. The penultimate target would be the Emperor and his Imperial Teigu: Shikoutazer. Sinbad came to the conclusion to just capture the Emperor and hand him over to the Revolutionary Army similar to the manga. And last but not least, Honest.