Nightgloom and Gailbreeze - Reviews

I like this

this novel had an alright premise but it is completely ruined by the incompetency of the author by making the story seem like it was written by a 5 year old

Overall its good the story developed in a good way but the way he train is just insane and it feelLike he would be a pro already but I know that its a fantasy ich novel  so it just bugging me and I dont mind it that much. I know people commented on the grammar but it really suck and I knew it is hard to write english too cuz English my second language. Like I get the overall sentence and stuff cuz I read google translation chinese novel. It just need a bit of editing sentence strcuture and it will be good, so if you trust me I would like to edit your work for you.

Well, no raw link means that this won't get picked.... Sucks since it's one of the better ones.                                                                                                                             

bro its good.??i thought cultivation genre was finished but boy was i wrong. i thought cultivation was repetitive, cliche and harem,etc..and as i was bored i tried it with no hope but boy was i wrong try it u will not regret it

pretty good in my opinion the pacing is good the character-building is quite good I'm not sure if he's overpowered but if you like the type of story upper story this is basically it

Please come back your story has so much potential please come back I need more ch

Get dropped???Unfortunately this is an interesting fanfic

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It was almost like he...exploded from the inside out from all that blood he had seen in there. And even though he had found him unscathed, that didn't mean the boy wasn't in pain still. It was just

And we could all use a little change

I close my eyes, ghost? Danger? He wants to win? Win what? I expect to feel pain, but nothing hurts. I open my eyes, tears streaming down my face as I see Sebastian lying on the floor, blood drenching his shirt. I collapse on the floor next to him, "you didn't have to do that, I wouldn't mind," tears run down my face like a waterfall and they won't seem to stop, "you shouldn't have to pay my consequences!"