story falls in line with usual second chance vrmmo stories. the writing and overall story however is quite good and enjoyable.only real downside for me is the grammar. it reads barely any better than a machine translation. if author could get a editor to help with his grammar this could easily become an amazing work.if you are interested in this genre of fiction I'd recommend adding to your library, checking in every once and a whole, throwing a stone occasionally, and when author finally gets an editor you binge read this like there's no tomorrow.
