Netori: Heavenly Young master Transmigrated as a Chump! - Reviews

Review for Chapter 21-30: Awesome dude! The rescue mission for a friend was awesome though I think you should have brought more people just to be on the safe side.We discovered more things. There's already a cult, a mutant and the MC is fond of very dark jokes lol XDRelationships with other characters are explored and can't wait to see more! Keep it up dude!

I thought this would be a goofy story that i would drop after a few chapters. surprisingly, its really good and I easily overlooked the fruit names. I love the e romance but i wish the mc wasnt ap dense, but hes a zombie so ill forgive him.

FIRST! Okay, time to be serious, the plot is a carbon copy of 'Digging to Survive: I can see Hints'. But in all fairness, I have read half a chapter so far (and reviewed right away to get first...) and I have to say, it's very well written and thought out.The characters are quite dynamic so far and not a lot of terribly cheesy cliches have been spotted as of yet. Last point. The MC and (presumably) FL are pretty cool. (I hope this isn't another filler trial read like 'MMORPG: Blessed God of War' and 'Killer: I can shapeshift infinitely' that are basically a better copycat of their worse counterparts...)

A very good book that has a lot of potential. However, the first three or four chapters have some visible grammatical mistakes. After that everything clears up. Really looking forward to more chapters!

Writing quality is in urgent need of an upgrade, if you dont get an editor or something to help with the quality I cant see this story being anything enjoyable to read.

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Charisma: 5

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