NEONIMUS - Reviews

omggggg it’s SO good I just loved your work. You go gurl, you are so talented!!!!

This comment has nothing to do with the novel but after seeing the word halo, it made me  reminisce about when i use to play halo reach when i was younger

Superb!! It's so hard to find a good BL story in webnovel. This is a gem!! Thanks so much to the author who have been writing this story. This has made my day :) Really worth a read for everyone..

Great story i like it.                                                                                                                     

Bruh, author. Why do i have the feeling of you copying other novel and then try to make it you own novel, but still **** up. Like mc got different names, monster sudden change to a panter king, or how mc pull a small black material from a toad's body. A toad, where the hell did a toad coming from. Also mc choose to hide his achievement, and all of a sudden everyone is like xinxin is the guy who did it, like how the **** did they know that, are they all time travelers.

Not a sports fan, clicked out of curiously. Definitely something I can get behind, rooting for Mate!

This is Amazing!1. The Main Character [Female] is badass, famous, rich, neutral arrogance, [Super cruel towards her enemy or outsider] and so cool!2. The World building is amazing as well, with different characters popping up [Not boring].3. Writing is quite Satisfying as well.*Can't Spoil the fun [SO JUST READ IT]*

Overall a good novel mate? just gotta add mommy aria??

PAAKKK

Imma be real honest here, I'm a sh1t tier with no stable update schedule and a knack for developing the story on the fly. The only redeeming quality about this novel is that there aren't any Fan-fics about 'invincible saint salaryman' that added onto the fact that I don't have to really build up the world since it already exists to s certain degree. English is my first language so you can understand the quality rating and I'm relatively good at using anime stereotypes and memes.That's about it, so if y'all are still interested thanks for putting up with my sub-par bullsh1t writing skills.

*hmm all right then I'm gonna up Power to S Endure to S,Dex to S,Agility to full S.and as for the rest of the drop item and magic stones I think would be best to exchange now in this system exchange*

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