Wow! Just so you know, I am not a very sci-fi person but this does make me want to keep reading and know what happened in the past for our male lead to become like that. I also see that you're heavily influenced by Japanese media.I did find it difficult to keep up sometimes when there was a sudden change in tenses or the genders while describing the events. Otherwise, it is really a great read, and I, most probably, will continue reading it. I personally really like characters like the raven head maiden. They are the best but my favorite part is male lead's interaction with his li'l sister XDAnd also, there is some element of comedy in-between and I really like it.