n o v a (incomplete) - Reviews

Why are they not updating the story anymore. Would love it to continue.                                                                                   

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I have to drop a star for this one.The update is way too slow only 3 chapters a week...i like reading new novels and form what have i seen so far(im not sort of expert) the stories that has fast release gets more attention than the slow ones so i hope the author increase the rate and not just add bonus when place in ranking cause readers only tend to vote when there is a chapter uploaded.although im one of the few people who vote for this everyday im having doubts to continue supporting coz theres a lot of interesting original stories with fast release.that all....

I really love it.For one, it has a cross-dressing female 2. It actually feels like it could happen, as in the problems that happen aren't just for no reason, there's actually a reason. Adding to that, the reasons aren't stupid.3. The main character isn't OP yet. She actually has flaws. And if she does have unusual strenght in something, it makes sense that she does as to say that there is a reason for her strenght. which creates a perfect character.4. Even the side characters, mobs, and cannon fodders are important. They have good reasons behind their actions and a solid character. This has got to be my most favorite book as of yet.

" y-you...need to r-run Anna-b-bell..." her mother pleaded through her ragged breaths her head slumped to the side before her breathing stopped and the room was deathly silent Annabell picked up the gun again and watched a few minutes pass before her mother quitely began to twitch her mothers eyes snapped open a filmy glaze had covered her once shinny eyes she let out a ragged moan before another shot rang out Annabell let the gun fall once again and began to sob as black blood oozed from the fresh bullet wound in her mothers skull, but that was ten years ago.

"Okay, maybe I should have sent a message through the friends list."(Kyouya)

But little did she know about the rough path that she had to cross to become one!

When I finally looked up I was already surrounded by a crowd of woman's. But luckily I was used to this and always prepared.

Ibu: "Tolong selametin anak saya dokter..!!!" dengan raut wajah panik dan memelas.

Only shooting stars break the mold

Just gonna say it first, underrated. VERY underrated.Now let's do some (mostly impartial) pros and cons:PROS: - It's FREE. I mean come on. At least at the time of this review, all chaps until now (ch 231) are free to read on webnovel. Major plus. - The characters and their interactions actually feel realistic. You can imagine most of the scenes naturally taking place. - No harem. No 1️⃣8️⃣+ stuff. There hasn't even been romance yet, which I'd say seems like a good choice considering the MC and others' current natures. - Though it isn't showcased in the early chaps, MC is very intelligent when it comes to schemes, money and serious fights. He isn't weak, but there are many opponents stronger, so he makes up for it with versatility, wits and being over-geared. - MC is more sociable than many MCs I've read so far. However, his 'friend circle' could've been better. That's all I'll say. - Oh, and he has a sentient system (which isn't stupidly OP, or OP at all for that matter) whose existence he prefers to ignore most of the time (because of its high-cost functions). It's slightly annoying, but don't worry, u rarely remember it's there - Not a major spoiler, but the MC's hobby is cooking, and no one can deny his skills in this department. The descriptions get my mouth watering often (but can occasionally get annoying when I want progression). - Arcs where MC hides his identity are ones that I really like as that's where he really shines. (Rare yet enjoyable moments of non-cringe coolness and domination) - Barely any noticeable info dumps.CONS: - Personally, the cast introduced until now has mostly annoying personalities (probably deliberate, but still). Some of the most recently introduced characters just seem like annoying extras whose conversations or fights I had barely any interest in. On that note... - A couple of arcs have exasperatingly fewer MC scenes relative to the side or mob characters. (Like "THIS MOB FIGHT SEEMS SO POINTLESSLY LONG! JUST GIVE ME MORE KAEL SCENES!!" level of exasperation) - The pace and progression are noticeably slow in the earlier chaps but get better in the later ones. - Sometimes, the MC suffers because of ridiculously petty company. Tho, this should be solved with a bit of character-dev. - Unfortunately, Kael ain't the best looker in his transmigrated body (find out for yourself how bad it is) and... LOTS of characters let him know that. My beef is with the second fact. I think he might be improving though. I'll be satisfied as long as the ugly-hate is reduced tho.IMPROVEMENTS: - I guess the characters' appearances could be mentioned or implied a bit more often (I don't have clear images of them in my head). Not on a crazy level (like hair and eye colour mentioned every other chap) tho. - The descriptions are well done when used at the right place and time. But sometimes it goes overboard and too repetitive. Try decreasing the assistance of the AI maybe, author? - Lastly, I guess the world and creature building as well as power scaling could be elaborated more.That's about all I can think of right now. Hope it'll help any readers as well as the author. You're welcome ?.

Why should you guys try this story?『Smart Mc 、Smart side character also NPC、 Smart Girls 、No pervert. Always stand on business. Ruthless and Forgiveness both side、And yes Gender Equality for punishment ??』1. The author doesn’t waste time and consistently gives us chapters every week.2. He/She always explains everything unless it’s a #spoiler.3. This is a story about kingdom-building, but you should try it because our MC doesn’t need anything—he alone is 'The Cursed One' and also 'The unpredicted one'(proclaimed by me, not the author).4. The MC doesn’t waste time on unnecessary things like chit-chat or love interests (so far).5. Although I prefer not to have a harem, it’s the author’s choice, and I can’t stop them, so I have to respect their opinion.6. The naming is very easy. But I have to say, the author should create an auxiliary volume where they explain every character’s name and power, like other authors do.7. Although I prefer 2,000 words per chapter, it’s too early to say. But I think within one month, the author can adapt to writing more.8 . Hope Everyone should give it a try.