Myths Reborn, Dawn - Reviews

Great book with lots of lovable characters and relationships

I have been into video games for a while and to be honest, I am absolutely amazed by seeing what the book has to offer. It may have a few weak points here and there but I think it would do amazing with better editing.best of luck author san

Story progress so slow and boring  ........ Theres so much unecessary moment imo. But apreciate author posting it daily ,   3,4/5......................................

I absolutely love love this book and trauma team. I really hope you pick this back up soon.

This story isn't bad, but there are much better. If those who are reading have already tried Super Gene or Monster Pet Evolution let me warn you that this one is based in those 2 and probably Monster Paradise but can't confirm that. In this things that this writer is copying he tryed to make it seem different but he actually made a poor job trying to hide the similarities. And there wasn't much imagination to create better situations. That being said if the reader can handle this story until chapter 80, they will see some changes and will actually start liking the developments and the later arcs.Warnings: the writer has a clear problem with non standardized women. Always complaining on the "fat/muscular" lead girl.He creates a lot of dead-end and plot-holes. It kinda gets annoying sometimes. Then forgets to explain what happened to certain monsters the MC got and explains it 20 chapters later. Basicly there are some subjects that aren't really explored or have the attention they should have. Then it gets confusing when he explains them further when there are no connections with future situations.Positive points: the world building is actually good. It's the merge if 2 types of story that actually go well together so it has a lot of potencial.And the characters actually show developments and growth.Last statement, taking in consideration the release speed and the writing quality, I think it's shamefull that they turned this into a premium after chapter 100. The story had only started showing good qualities and they already implemented the paying system. It's a good way to say goodbye to the readers that actually managed to handle all the early bad writing and hang on until the good part started.

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Loving the story It's a common plot, but the storyline is what makes this interesting. It's also good to see the main character mature. The world-building is amazing and just add some new twist and it will be remarkable. #Loveit??

You already know how shameless I am.Thank you for reading I know this is not my best work but I'll do my best.Extra chapters for powerstones:50 - 2 chapters100 - 5 chapters200 - 15 chapters

Read this on gravity tales and couldn't continue cause if the racist stereotypes  retarded the chinese author have of different people from differet countries. The protagonist is a psychopath rapist who likes killing for the sake of killing. This novel is literally the author projecting his biases and desires to do whatever the **** he wants in a world filled with no consequences. LMAO at anyone who thinks this is a good novel and gives it a higher rating than 1

Grammar needs to be improved, otherwise it's a decent novel with an actual low key main character.there have been low key mcs before but the moment someone does'nt give them "face" it's over with being low key. i hope this character stays low key even when he gets stronger.writing quality: bad grammar but it is not unreadable.2.5 stars would mean average so I'll give you 2 starsstability of updates: no clue only 3 chapters are out. I'll give you half stars so 3.other things can't be judged with 3 chapters released.Character design: I'll give you 3 stars, until now the characters are pretty generic and except for the mc no other characters were properly introduced, but as i said  i'm eager to see a low key mc.

Honestly, I’m not too far into the story yet, but this is a great concept. Writing is great as well. Please keep updating regularly and I promise this will be a new favorite for myself and probably for others as well. I can’t wait to see what you have cooked up for this world you’ve created. Thank you.

He did not know what to do, so he could only scratched the back of his head while feeling guilty and turned his eyes to the General before moving it to Rae Gu.