i just readed three chaptersyour novel has strong character introductionworld building is goodpacing is balanced not too rush and not to slowsome plot point is like that you can easily predict very detailed it sometime disrupt the pace complex plot setup Overall, the first 3 chapters of "Deceit Chronicles" lay a strong foundation for the story, with engaging characters, a richly detailed world, and a well-balanced mix of action and exposition. While there are some areas that may need refinement, the strengths of the early chapters promise an exciting and immersive reading experience. looking forward