Ok, since there are only 4 chapters currently... I can't say much, except the few grammar errors that I found which could easily be edited and the para-phrasing that could be improved... The story is just awesome! A await to see how the story goes in the later chapters!
Hello my name is Bella Smith (Isabella Smith). When i was younger my dream was to be a dancer, but reality is harsh and if you want to survive in this world you cant do what you love.
A couple of days later, Gabe was led back to a waiting room. He thought it might be his lawyer, Rupert, but since he had seen him just the week before, with little more to say than his appeal was in the process, Gabe doubted it was him.
I saw a strange book with pictures flash in my mind which the person me? still confused! people called comic book flash in my eyes as people I saw a team of people in spandex. They were... super heroes?' yes... fiction- well... I wouldn't be sure if they are fictional now cause I am here and I was considered fiction
