Mystic Dark Veil - Reviews

here Bolcurut, desu. This novel has a slow plot and a backward plot. So, don't be surprised if, in volume 1, the main character hasn't started playing the game yet. Thank you for your attention.

Very well written and thought out concept. I thought it would be about a guy who got constantly cucked in life, but sometimes being cucked has advantages ?

Such a shame, the story got me really hooked but the writing quality makes it a headache to read and understand. Fast passed, the story is going fast, random things happens when there is already something going on. Characters interactions could be more deep and meaningful, tbh I didn’t feel that much emotions and thoughts behind the conversations.Also I don’t quite yet understand the MC on a deeper level, he just does stuffs.

I quite like beast taming novels and this one seems like a decent one for the genre.  The author is clearly trying to spice things up by merging two types of books, side character and beast taming.  The MC and FL are boring but in a way that could be really good if done well. I am interested enough to keep following it.That said, the translation is bad.  Like the tamed beast is both small enough to fit on the MCs shoulder and big enough to carry him and two others.  There are typos in chapter titles, duplicated text, gender is all over the place, and the list goes on.  There are also nitpicking concerns, like a top school 'teaches' by ignoring students and telling them to figure it out on their own?  Overall though, I am hopeful.

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This is nothing but ranting about Africa not a story don’t waste your time

I have always love gender bender novels and fics. A very interesting take when it comes to system and VR. I would love to read more. >................

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