Mystery of Fate: Luna Della's Second Chance - Reviews

It's a ok history, but the translation is really horrible. Horrible that looks like MTL. MC is hard working but not good with women. It's fast paced with OP MC.

This is my third and final review as the story has concluded and I have to say that I enjoyed every single chapter and the complete journey.  This is a story worth reading it breaks the mold in defining balance in male and female characters who flawed are still likeable for the most part and have no hesitancy recommending it to anyone who wants that.  Apart from the balance what I appreciate is the true sincerity and respect that came out of MCs towards their other half especially when it comes to their dreams/wishes.  There was no typical obsession, possession, over the top arrogance crap especially from the ML which to some can be a turn on but largely is a turn off.  What one felt with the couples were a loving and true relationship so you cannot help but want them together  but for those without someone in real life want it in their own lives as well though this is fiction.It was fun waiting until 7:00 am EST anticipating the next chapter which came like clockwork.  When I wanted to comment our favorite first comment stealer caitlin was there.  My only issue with this novel is that its unappreciated in the rankings.  This story is straight up quality and I encourage you to read every chapter as its never boring.  Its a happy but sad departure, this novel will now leave my library.  Take care of yourself Sorahana and I wish you all the best for your future you deserve it.

This novel is great! My only complaint is the slow release rate! Why is it only 12 chapters! Every other novel released at least 50 chapters on release!

The beginning is a bit slow, but soon picks up. The cover of this novel I feel does not do this book justice, but lets ignore that for a second. This book is incredibly well written and has an interesting development style in the book. While the main character is focused upon greatly, he is merely serving as a binding for the story arcs that occur between each character while simultaneously being influenced by each side character that he is introduced to. The author introduces several side characters slowly, with an incredibly heartwarming yet humorous story arc, as the novel progresses to always keep it interesting. Well worth the read, and i reccomend at least to give it a try.

Read the mtlI get boring the further you read in the novelplot just repeats itself ............................................................

This story seems really god the man character is interesting (although did you mean for him to seem so sociopathic in the early chapters? I mean he says hes okay with being an npc because he was getting bored) but more than that, please god run the early chapters through grammerly or a read-to-text or something cause this story is great but my god i actually can’t understand what you mean in some of the paragraphs without like 10 careful rereads

You limit the abilities of the mc. Like wtf, why did you even do that?? He is ridiculously strong but you slowed down his growth in game by 90%. You didn't even spare his experience acquisition. You made one of the richest person on the planet mc's slave but you can't even make the  mc ride a care to school?? Creativeness man. Do you know that word? Be creative but don't exaggerate it.Dropping it.

Good novel. I love it. Don't drop it.

Shameless author here...So, I've worked really hard to put this story together and it's taken me a long while so I hope anyone reading this enjoys it.I'm pretty confident in my english, so it should be easy to understand what I'm writing.I do tend to make things move slowly, it's just my writing style, but I'm sure that if you bear with it you'll be happy when we reach the important parts of the story.I don't want to give you any of my opinions about the story here because that's up to you to decide...I'd appreciate any feedback you can give me.Thanks so much for reading this I hope you give my work a chance, it will really mean the world to me... and take care of yourselves-S

Overall nice novel! Writing Quality: 3/5. You should keep the consistency of your paragrafs more or less the same. I noticed that some times your paragrafs are soooo long. Try to keep them smaller for better reading. And try to separate dialogs from normal text so that thay are not so connected( sometimes it's hard to read because of that)Updates: 5/5. ;)Story: 5/5. The best part in my opinion.Character: 4/5. Very good but You should take some time with Your characters. It feels a bit rushed.World: 5/5. Excellent in my opinion.

Writing Quality 5Stability of Updating 5Story Development 5 Character Design 5World background 5Fantastic = action, romance, and drama, give them 100/100 each

It's very frustrating that even though this was picked up by Qidian months ago, the translator continues to update rarely, just in time for them to not be forced to drop the story :(