Mysterious Transcendents - Reviews

I'm gonna be shameless and leave a review until I get a rating and don't need this anymore, anyways, the story is as described in the synopsis, also, you might be confused as to why things are unknown even after the prologue, it is intentional M. M is out

I am really interested in this story, the way the story is narrated is soo nice, i love it

I love this novel, it is short but it is shaping out to be a very interesting story, I also recommend to the writer to show the thoughts of the characters but that's about it good luck.

The author did well with the prologue, although at first glance it may seem like he didn't put enough in the synopsis of the novel you quickly lose that notion once you start reading. The prologue is short yet enticing giving the readers enough to get a general idea of what the novel is about but also leaving them with an after taste in their brain which demands that you read more. As the chapters continue you begin to be drawn in by the characters and the way the author tells his story. Putting aside the interesting concept behind the story for a new author the writing is pretty top notch and as more chapters are published I'm sure their skill will increase exponentially. Give this book a read you won't regret it.

This is a really interesting novel. The writing gets a bit confusing sometimes but the plot unravels itself beautifully. Each character has it's own specific feature, making he/she unique in their own way. The storyline is quite mysterious. Overall, great work!

I have to start off this review saying this books writing quality, is impeccable! Perfect spelling so far, no grammatical errors. However the one criticism I have over writing is description.
Description is good, but when there's to much of it, it gets out of hand and leaves nothing to the imagination. Besides that I love the description over the characters, they seem so beautiful, and likable so far as well.
Certain areas are confusing as to whether it's a flashback or current time. So besides that this book is pretty epic this far and I'd suggest it to anyone who's looking for an assassin like story with elemental background!

Well, the concept of the story is nice. Minor grammatical errors that can be fixed in a jiffy and other than that I feel some paragraphs were a bit long but I have the same problem but otherwise I think it's a well thought out concept

What are ya doing when I was reading peacefully I was interrupted by the no more chapters update more and maybe try daily yourviewership will probably skyrocket

I have barely any problems with the story that the other reviewers haven't already commented on like the synopsis and the characters but I recommend stack piling chapters because you need update more regularly

I think that you should work on the characters backstory and make them more fleshed out and more real, the world building is great and keep updating

This is a good story with an interesting plot and cool characters. A reader can tell right off the bat that the plot is action-packed. An entertaining read. I enjoyed it.

Keep it up.
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The story and world building is good and the updating is regular, the writing quality is amazing and the character design is good and the plot is interesting