My World. - Reviews

this is a masterpiece and I hope author-nim lives a happy life and continues to grow

A new genre, fresh concept, and interesting work. The author is very clear about his/her views on the world background. The characters were well developed.

So far so goooooooooood....... But need upgradein on release system.. ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

This is good and light story and the development of story is also getting better day by day. I like both the characters specially Dylan. Keep going

the story goes too slow.... not for me so i drooped it .. but the story got a good flow and indeed its a hidden gem.. just not suited for me.. or any other who don,t like slow development pace story ...

This is garbage too much why the mc so annoying

Very nice story indeed, I had the urge to read the 10 chapters. I would say probably be more descriptive on the writing so I can feel the feelings of the peoople

simple to say it has an interesting dark story world building is still going on at first it was base on post apocalypse theme still surpriseingly good development

All in all the idea is interesting. The origin of abnormalities is mentioned very well. Further the setting is well defined. What bugged me was the paragraphing issue. Over in all, the novel will do well as long as the author grows with the idea.

       "Or have the date in a calmer setting like the park."

"ok2, I'll go outside and start farming gold and material, see you later! Also i already paid for the inn feel free to rest and adjust your kind for a while." (Kyouya)

But when the trio reaches home, they're greeted with another Early Stage Inner Qi Realm cultivator, Wan Nian Qing! It seems that Zhang Wu Ji wasn't the only one blessed by heaven in their path of Physical Qi Cultivation!