When i read the first chapter I thought that it had a nice setup, chapters 2-4 was okay and boom and it got a really bad transition from one thing to another... maybe it's readable? I know I wont read it with the way it's right now, good luck
wonderful book, and love the short story as well! I fell in love with the first book and now i just can't stop! Muse is a brilliant writer! you will not be disappointed just make sure you start from the first book :)
