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What can I say about this? The title is misleading.
- The one who always starts something is the MC.
- fMC is not a pervert.
- There’s a lack of romantic tension (seriously, I read this story with a poker face because the relationship is too flat).
- They act more like siblings, even avoiding holding hands.
- They don’t want to tell their friends about their relationship (I hate this cliché, it’s overused and frustrating).
- Ironically, their friends start dating and kissing within two weeks, while the MC and fMC don’t even want to hold hands.
After 20 chapters, I was initially pleased with the fast-paced plot, but it has slowed down significantly, with three chapters covering just one day in the story. Their relationship feels stagnant and boring.
I don’t understand why they don’t feel love for each other after 18 years as childhood friends. I remember loving my childhood friend back in elementary school.
But maybe this is a 1 in 100 million scenario.
If this pace continues, I can picture them kissing on the cheek after three months, on the lips after a year, and having a French kiss after two years. And they might have sex after five years.
I hope I’m wrong, but given that the author has only posted 63 chapters in three years, I doubt it.
It’s a waste of a good premise, if I may say so.