My Uncle My Husband - Reviews

I miss this book

great read nice world building and we'll written character

It’s a great story.                                                                                                                        

You really have a wide spectrum of imagination. To make up different scenarios of differing settings is truly a creative feat. It is amusing that the POV is like the narration of the readers, letting us be more intimate with the story. As always, grammatical errors are something that we have to take into account when writing. They can be easily corrected and will able you to have a better progression in your passages. Each scenarios can be a story on their own, that is provided. However, I do feel, as opposed to the other review, that the pacing is quite hurried? I don't really know how to word it, but yes, it feels like that. Also, in between dialogues, please put in a little bit of transition, so it wouldn't be as lengthy as it is now. Let the information flow out through the whole chapter instead of clumping them in one paragraph.All in all, this is a great test for imaginative people. It is exciting to read different worlds in each chapter! You are a great writer, so please continue writing! I'm gonna be cheering you on!

seriously dude if you want to copy a Hollywood novel you should do some novels that people haven't really read yet  but,really are you for real copying one of the most readed and famous Hollywood novel " I am in Hollywood " and you can't even give a proper translation, Mtl has better translation than this........

a fun novel to read and the grammar are good and each arc is amazing ?

"Okay, this is chase really," Ambre concluded.

Artes Marciais:

"Yes Sir"

❝Dominus! It-it was my fault!❞ Fausta--having ran quite a distance--interfered as the gut-wrenching sight greets her. Her legs felt extremely tremulous, and Aquilo's glacial winds seemed to have surged through the different parts of her body at the first sign of her fear. ❝I was not able to send the message in due time as my attentions were diverted. It was my insolence that caused your displeasure!❞

Kenji and I activate our Magic Eye and soon after, we can see and hear humans around the place.

it's a good read and i like this take on a system. the MC doesn't strike me as someone brain dead like you tend to find in stories similar to this.Having said that past chapter 30, the author definitely needs an editor. Names are missing letters, grammatical errors that force you to mentally substitute the word out, and it disrupts the overall flow. Kael selecting his squad should have been fun but was ruined by grammar issues. Adrian/Adria for the protagonist was particularly annoying. it's overall a fun read but not one that i would advise spending coins on.