My Twelve Rune Maidens - Reviews

One thing Is very clear about this novel. The author put a lot of work in it & did his research which is much appreciated. But 2 things I didn't like about this novel that caused me to ultimately drop it after 110 chapters.1. the story is too linear & there are rarely any twists. this makes the novel boring.2. the MC is a hypocrite & nothing special about him.

I like the story and how it's progressing but I've noticed on multiple occasions that it seems the author forgot about some stuff he put earlier in the story.For example: when he upgrades his class to "Jack of all trades" it said he gained all the abilities of the classes you can start as (cleric, necromancer, paladin, etc.), but later on in the story he's still buying some of the skills from those classes and not the upgraded versions.Ch 273 - the info section for "Versatile: Jack of all Trades"Ch 292 - cleric class: domain of tranquility Ch 303p - druid class: Shapeshifting skill

interesting background. dialogue could use some work. Characters are too innocent. Showing mercy once is fine, the second time they shouldn't leave unscathed.

good story. need more chaps........................... .. ..   . ..............need more...............need more................need more...............need more................  need more..............need more................need more

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interesting story i will give it a try ❤️

"Oh ok. who.. who are you? where did you come from..?" I finally  thought it out. then the voice spoke again.

"I am sorry, but I had to wait, and I did, and now, we are safe."

and that the end of today work.

You'll never know if you don't go (go!)

"I wanted to take a quick nap after that fight. But, there you were making it impossible. I opened my eyes to see an angel, my mate and have not been the same person since then. I was ready to mark you right there and then you called me a dog which brought me out of my trance. I thought you were a normal human being and that stopped me from proceeding." He shakes his head and is smiling.

A Complete Mess of a Timeline!I can’t believe how frustrating this was! From the very first page, it felt like I was thrown into a chaotic blender of ideas. Seriously, it’s like the author couldn’t decide what story to tell and just threw everything at the wall to see what stuck.One moment we’re in the middle of a tense scene, and the next, it jumps to a completely different plot point without any warning. It’s maddening! The timeline is so jumbled that I found myself lost, flipping back and forth just trying to piece together what was happening.Instead of a cohesive narrative, I got a disjointed mess that left me confused and irritated. I wanted to engage with the story, but I couldn’t because it felt like I was following a train wreck.Do yourself a favor and skip this one unless you enjoy frustration and chaos. Save your time and sanity!