so I'm only on chapter 50 while I write this, I will update later when I read more. so I notice a lot of grammar errors. by that I mean use of the wrong word for example the word taste is never used it's always test and she/he are wrong once and a while. it's not a big deal you know what the author is trying to say. the story is very slice of life at the moment. mostly revolving around the fmc and how she believes every male around her to be an idiot. the male mc doesn't get a whole lot of screen time but when he does he just feels like a push over and I haven't seen a lot of character development with him. it has being mentioned that other people see the emotional struggles he shows but nobody really does anything to help. they just kinda say "oh this other person will help" or at least that's how it feels to me finally I think my review sounded mostly negative but I do think this can be a great novel once the characters grow a little bit. I see a lot of potential in it and I fully believe the author can make that happen.
