My System & My Academy of Superpowers - Reviews

it's my first time reading a web novel. I think this one was a good one I am glad this one is my first web novel. thank you author. please continue updating more and more! !!

Hey author. Liked your work. This is my second time writing a review for your novel. the reason?
because I want to answer some of your questions.
first: yes, I liked Ryan's past about his traumatic "First girlfriend" experience. I would like to read more about it.
Second: The question you asked in your discord; about that, I would like to see Ryan turn into a vampire right away. but you said that that is not the main point here so it can't be done by changing the story's current plot. so let it  be.
Third: The pace he's evolving is great. Ryan's Ring System is perfect in my eyes. it would be nice to see Ryan going on another plants to hunt monsters with his System. I hope you upload those chapters ahead in the story.
That was it from me. Thanks for the good novel.

I am writing yet another review to thanks all the people who are voting for this novel, commenting and letting me know your thoughts, writing a review, and most importantly... for adding this novel into your library.
It means a lot thanks very much really. I look forward for your support.

Yo. Think, you have the solution for the biggest problem in your life.... but still can't overcome it, it doesn't matter and feel like you don't matter. Welcome to my world.
Go to that shop you have always wanted to but didn't cause it's expensive. go get that thing you wanted as a kid, go get that stuff you want right now. try what you always wanted to. Drink that expensive cocktail you wanted to, try that expensive dish you always wanted to try.
do whatever you want, doesn't matter what you do, this world won't change... cause you don't matter. if everyone will become special, unique, then who will be unique and special?
This is how the cover for the first volume: My Ring System looks like.

k how do I say it

K, I am truly impressed by this novel. it was an amazing story line! the more chapters I read, the more interesting and amazing the story gets. the more story progresses the better it gets.
yes while reading it feels like the chapters are short and in one chapter you read nothing which make you wanna read more and more chapters in less time.
By that, I don't mean that the author pulls his story, no. it has an amazing pace. everything in this story, by my opinion, has happened for a reason. sooner or later, you know the reason why it happened.
Good work, author. Keep producing more chapters. thank you.

I’m really interested in this story because the summary is very captivating. But i got thrown off by the ‘harem’ tag. Dear lord, nothing is worse than when reading d*mn good book, but got suddenly distrupted by passive agressive tsunderes or stubborn legal lolis. Thus, unecessary shallow arguments and misunderstandings ensues that drags on and onnnn

Hello Author, I noticed thatbypu like to use quaint and rarely use words which do indeed give the novel a unique and flashy feel but I would advice you to not use them any further unless you can suddenly increase your writing skills by a large margin because using flashy words when your writing skills are not quite there yet will make it harder for you to keep up the 89 same pace and quality of the story. It will make it harder for you to explain certain scenarios without constantly referencing which will give important scenes a rigid feel.

sincerely, a fellow aspiring writer.

I'm one of those "silent or ghost readers" I don't comment or review much. I just wanted to tell the author that please improve your writing quality

Got to the second chapter before I had to put this down.  Author, too much inconsistency.  Stating the MC can't react in time and gets knocked out by a little kid.  Then saying he has super speed as a trait.  Later he dodges bullets and knocks out a grown man with a rock.  20 kph is actually slow, look it up.  Ryan is 16 but  he acts and thinks like an 8 year old.  The police would never leave a minor alone in their house after their parents death.  He would be ushered to his next of kin or whoever's agreed to take care of him. A little advice- use google to find out facts before you start writing and stating things as if they are truth. Can't help but imagine someone running full out but moving like a geriatric with a walker.  I wish you good luck with your novel, and every thing.

Exhilarating work this is, yes. I don't wanna sound too dramatic but this is the story which adds thrill to my boring life as a reader. I loved this work. thanks author of this work.

This first chapter was on fire. But I am surprised by how weak the author has made the MC. ig this will change. thanks again for such a good book