My-SunWarrior system - Reviews

didn't read beyond the freely available chapters but from what I read, it was extremely slow space. it takes forever to level up and it seriously needs an editor, too many typos and grammatical mistakes.This novel was not for me.

It’s a really good book so far. I love the story line, and the characters, this is a good book. I’ve even recommended to some of my friends. I encourage the people who are reading this to share or recommend to your friends! I did have some confusion at a point or two but after all it’s a good book!?❤️?❤️

nice work the plot is amazing Reading the blurb Along has gotten me glued to the novel alreadyI hope you keep up the good work authorhappy to be the first reviewer ??

I have read a few chapters.. the storyline progresses quickly.. the author's English is good enough to understand and even use describing words. However, many of those describing words are placed in awkward places of the sentences. I also wish there was more description on everything.. the setting, the characters.. etc. Good luck, author, please continue your hard word and improve your English.

Ten chapters in, and I can safely say I'm impressed. This novel has exceeded all the expectations I had of it, from the start. While it's not your conventional WN (based on where it is set amongst other things), the writing quality is insanely good. Like, really, really good. In fact, I think it trumps the majority of novels on this platform (not necessarily in terms of using complicated or sophisticated words, but as a fellow writer, I can appreciate good quality when I say it). So far, story development has been satisfactory, with the pace being neither too slow, nor too fast. Character Design is also great, with the author utilising different themes to bring them to life. I particularly have a soft spot for Zarqa, and Alibaba. Update stability is consistent, tho due to some irl circumstances, the release rate can't be higher. Which is absolutely fine. As long as there's still chapters being uploaded, that's all that matters ?Lastly, since I've only just finished the introductory arc, I can't speak much about world background. But after getting a glimpse of the author's skill, I'm sure it'd also be great. P.s.Great job so far, Author! Don't be discouraged by the lack of readers, you have a gem in your hands ???

-Do you think that is the only thing you have to explain? why is it that you do all this acting unreasonable? with this, you will not attract my attention...

"What? How is that possible? Ye Futian used multiple spells each from different attributes at the same time? The casting speed was also instantaneous!" the crowd watching said

Goddess.

{I would. But...} Nam paused, as if pondering whether to tell Atlas. {it's pretty complicated. I'll reveal the secret when you get stronger.}

Emric: I am.. They use paper as their weapon. They can manipulate it in all sorts of ways. They are one of the great Assassin clans of the Central Kingdom. All four of the mighty clans were manipulated into a full scale war by the government in order to keep these powerful folk to a non-revolt type population. It was pretty messed up.

I just simply like how the story's built!