My Servant Is An Elf Knight From Another World - Reviews

it is a really good book with great pacing (in my opinion) and with good and execptional plot changes that really hook the reader in to read more and more of the story.

Im really enjoying this one. Well written and great dialogue between characters. It reminds me a lot of Jim Butcher’s The Dresden Files, in a good way.

Came for the harem tag..... Expecting love comedy or what-not, but nah only serious things happening.... sooo I'm leaving I guess, but here 5 star for elf.

- LifeIsAboutChoices

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I have nothing to say so here's my ultimate copy/paste!

why does the girl in the cover remind me of a hentai ive read


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I will be honest, review pre chp 240 is, ie tournament arc, would have been lower. Cast of characters are great and diverse, and MC was alright. UNTIL the tournament arc. He is now more than alright, he is awesome. Slight spoilers, MC (who we still don't know the name of) really grows a spine, and is willing and able to fight for the girls in his harem, and it is acknowledged that it is a harem, and he acknowledges feelings that he and the girls have. (A breath of fresh air from dense, clueless MCs). Really great novel, should be up there with Supreme Magus. Great work author

one of the best light novel out there. it can  rival other famous light novels from japan. i honestly don't think i will find this kind of quality in this site. hope u made it to the top.

An absolutely fantastic read, that always has me wishing that the fabled time for an update would come ever faster. A concept that utilizes your generic and common tropes in this style of a story and then takes it high heavens with its masterful story-telling. I wasn't much a fan of a first-person narration before. This, however, completely changed my outlook on things. The characters are well-written, the stories well fleshed out leaving me a happy and content reader. Well, shy of an even faster upload schedule but I guess perfection takes time to write, and I'm willing to wait. Definitely recommended! [img=recommend]

a very good novel to read .... high quality story .... deep foundation .... beautifully presented characters .... a light touch of mystery .... and lighthearted slice-of-lif events .... MC is good enough for starter MCs .... Elf knightness  is not foolish girl or justice muscle brain it is a character that have a very high charisma for the readers .... I sincerely hope that you Mr.author will keep writing your beautiful story without running it.

wish you success.

I feel like things happened too fast in this story. In the point of view of the protagonist who lived with Ash for a few weeks it might make sense, but honestly reading the chapters after the end of vol.1 just made me annoyed...

We had like 10 chapters of exposion to Ash, then she got kidnapped, then she got pissed at the protag and didn't stop thinking she's the center of the world's problems until now, like what... Think about it for a sec, the matriarchs and the succubus lost their home world because an evil goddes destroyed it, that's a lot of baggage; our lovely and annoying elf thinks that just because she was born an elf she's evil, I wonder what does that say about our kind protagonist, think she forgot but he is literally the son of the incarnation of evil and a hero, but sure being born an elf makes you evil...

Idk man, I just don't care enough about Ash to give a f* about her problems, to be honest the chapters were she doesn't appear are 10x better, it's the only way the protag doesn't have to act like he's in a landmine field afterall...

In conclusion, the novel is good, but everything happened too quickly, after the first matriarch appearence the plot didn't slow down for even a minute, we had 10000 new characters introduced, matriarcs, blighfall, mastermind of the blighfall and during all that the romantic/slice of life plot didn't progress even a bit, Ash still being annoying af, we don't know anything about Ria, besides the fact that if I was her master, I would have probably used a order to make her leave me alone during most of the chapters (talk about some1 who has no respect for other ppls feelings... If I was sad af because of some1 I care about the last thing I would want to hear is Ria's voice that's 4sure...), nothing to say about the matriarchs they kinda don't have any personality, one of them is annoying and the other is a zombie (a cute zombie that is quite caring, but still no other personality traits), the succubus is getting a bit of the spotlight in the last few chapters, but nothing really to talk about and let's ignore Amanda...

As some1 who has nothing to do i'll probably keep reading the novel, but I would like to see some character progression after this blight disaster arc ends... The parents of the protag are still ghosting him, we know nothing of the girls that will be a part of the harem except their names and a few personality traits and for god sakes make Ash less annoying please, more interactions with the succubus and a less annoying Ria would appreacited.

Writing Quality  
The first ten chapters were great. If it would have kept the same non-serious Slice of Life story going out would have been a great story. The syntax and spelling is some of the best in this platform. So much so that at first I was confused by the mixed reviews and wondering why it wasn't on a more mainstream platform like Royal Roads rising stars or trending.

As it turns out the reason is that start is just a catfish for a dark fantasy romance story that lurks right around the corner. A style that's much more dower and depressing. A real chore to read. It never recovers its tone and style at the start. Slowly it eats away at what you liked about it in the start until you look up, metaphorically speaking, and wonder how you got here from there.

Truly a shame. But the depictions of torture and mind control of the love interest. For over thirty chapters as it amateurishly throws female leads at you left and right in total chaos best represents this series and why it isn't going to be going mainstream anytime soon. What on Earth were you thinking? You had such a good plot going. This is what creative writing does when you don't sit in the driver's seat doing outlines for the chapters and the arcs themselves. Storyboarding a chapter before and after you write it to make sure that it's not just enjoyable to read, but you got the tone across you wanted. And doing drafts so the overall product doesn't suck. A comedy of poor writer decisions. Sigh...

Story Development
I don't think I need to say more there, do I?

Character Design   
They were well put together at first.

Update Stability     
There's over 400 chapters somehow. Probably because you skipped doing quality assurance writing?

World Background   
That lack of planning really shows here. The world-building can be said to be banal and likely written chapter to chapter. When normally you're supposed to write this first. I'll still rate it middling, because most amateur writers have no idea what a Literature Bible is anyway. Even if you pointed them at the Fallout Bible for instance? Some of them might even argue it overkill.

The novel is relatively well written with no obvious glaring errors. The plot however contains way too much drama hurt and heartache for my liking. There is also very little to bordering on no romance whatsoever and with a standard beaten down protagonist who thinks he is worthless it's kinda depressing overall.

It is quite good, excellent grammar for webnovel standards. The character building is actually quite decent as well, and the slower paced arcs are quite noce for a change. I’m looking forward to more! I hope you don’t dissapoint Sir Author/Diaper lover.