My Pirate System - Reviews

the opening was so nice, and you could feel the chaos and unbalanced waves, the system begins a bit late but don't worry, you will be entertained enough on this voyage with pirates. [img=recommend]

not good enough to recommend but not to incredibly terrible to say its not worth giving it a chance either, still wouldn't recommend.

friendly warning to potential readers the mcs mom whòŕes herself out for money in chapter 15
something like that is not for me,hence I'll head out.

Story was good. really good with world devolopment. But MC'S adopted mother opted to who*e(gangb*nged) herself out, for a reason. Author just put this scene casually. D*ckhead author should have put warning in synopsis if he was gonna put this type of with discription,since lot of people are sensitive with this type of scene.
should not be suprising if author put hardcore Netor*re casually with discription.
I hope this comment stays,not get deleted.

Just found this in the new novels a interesting read it has a lot of potential hope there will be more of it[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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I really like this story so far! Honestly, I wasn't a big fan of system books, but I find this book rather intriguing. Keep up the good work author~

It's a story with potential. The pirates theme is very interesting and not something very explored. It's nice to see someone telling a story like that.

Despite this, I believe that the author needed to make readers know the protagonist more. He spent many chapters explaining and showing the prison break and when he barely starts to show the mc path, his choices and personality construction... Locked Chapter. Most of what I saw was tragedy after tragedy happening in Shiro's life.

For me, it needs more for people to decide whether or not to continue reading the story. Not much to say based on the free chapters. It just has a lot of potential. The world, the monsters, gods, powers, history... All of this can be very good but you couldn't see it in the 34 free chapters.

I wish the author success on this journey. I hope you do a good job. Peace!

Cool concept!
Though I've read novels where pirates are included in the story, they weren't heavily focused. Only an arc. But it seems that the author plans a grand novel here for Shiro.
(btw, names are Eric, Kylle, Ria, Shawn then boom, Shiro was named to him. )
Not sure if it's due to the unidentified woman's backstory.
Anyway, good story. easy to read. not wordy. I like third pov as well. i dont really read first pov. thanks for that.
keep it up.

I see the potential. I will continue to vote daily and gift if it goes well. Looking for more explanation on the powers and other things.

First 17 chapters are mazing i really liked it but i don’t really know what they look like may be after a time skip?















And i need like a 100 chapter rn please with a cherry on top

Finally, I'm here to drop a review that came directly from my... touchscreen device.
The intro was a bit interesting- introduction of the character and his prowess before the official start of the work.
The writing quality is great for someone who's native language isn't English, and the book's design is great.
Although they are some minor errors, they do not affect the book's flow. The plot is great and starting chapters hooking.
Good job man, hope you continue to release more amazing chapters!