My Otherworld Life As A Vampire - Reviews

YES!! FINALLY I HAVE FOUND A BOOK THAT HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH YUR!! I HAVE BEEN FINDING SOMETHING LIKE THIS MY WHOLE READER LIFE AND FINALLY FOUND ONE !! FOR THIS AN ABSOLUTE NO HESITATION 5 STARS !!!

Just a short review. Grammar, so many mistakes, 1/10. World building, honestly it is a mess, 3/10. Characters, for 100  chapters are static, 3/10. Story, well it is ordinary, nothing new here 4/10. Overall 3/10.  As a side note, pneumonia can be cured, and the sickness can last up to 3 months not 6 years. Unless you are unlucky and the illness takes a severe form which, if not treated immediately, it is fatal. Author do research next time.

idiotic mc,hard to understand mc, hypocrite mc and an mc who don't have an common knowledge that even an 5 year old child knows and though other than the useless st*pid mc,slightly good grammar with slightly bad choice of words though this one can be excuse after all it's not like everyone is good at English and also everyone makes mistake after all,many chapters good a interesting story with st*pid mc and also the reason why this rate overall is 3.8 because of the mc! I freaking can't stand him at all

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honestly. I hear people talk about Idiot MC.
that was chapter two. of course, she's an idiot. zero life growth of any kind before death. though some of the grammar and accuracy of science could use some work, all in all, it's not bad of a book. Definitely read worse. If I wanted an immaculate English reading with solid consistency, I read Tolkien. this is not a terrible book, but you definitely need to be patient with it.

still give it average views, but keep it up, author. practice does, in fact, make perfect.

This novel is so good ?I literally want to read it all day

########################################## This is your typical overpowered mc nothing new get isekai get max level from the start#################################

good sorry yes the Grammer can be off at time but I have managed to read all that is out so far in long 2 days.

Ok, I'm just gonna say this first; the story of this book is great, but the grammar is not really the best, which can lead to confusion. Some words are misspelled or misplaced, and the point of view switches from first to third person every now and then, which can lead to confusion.

If you get past that, the overall story and world development are really good, but I wish the first arc was a little longer. I think it would've been nice if some hero sealed her up so you could see the demise from the antagonists point of view, but the end of the first arc was still satisfying. The second arc is also really good, in my opinion, but in this arc, the grammar worsens. Overall, it's a really good story, but the typos need fixing.

Seriously, at first I loved this story. But the more this story progresses, the more it really becomes a mess. We don't really see the primordial vampire we expected when we started reading the story. And then she accepts that her servants do anything to her, give her poison, forcibly puts her to sleep more than once.

I don't write reviews but I am gonna try this time. Well the MC is very hard to understand and he/she just does whatever they want and the side characters are just plain stupid they do things so that the MC can look cool like for example a restaurant customer is your reservation is not here and than the manager barges in apologizes to the MC and fires the employee it is fine if it has 1 aor 2 such scene in like 10 ch but this is like every single chapter which I don't like and than instead of overpowering their opponents the MC just drags the fight until it is tiring ( I am speaking about chapters over 100) 1 to 99 ch is pretty good i think

There are some programs you can use for checking and correcting grammatical errors such as Grammarly and ChatGPT.