My Motherland - Reviews

I swear to god if this novel doesn't get picked I'll never read a trial book ever again!! This novel is the definition of casual and romance!! The characters are very fleshed out, it's not just the MC becoming very rich but also characters developing along with him. I HOPE THIS NOVEL GETS PICKED AND IF YOU'RE CONSIDERING TO READ THIS OR NOT, THEN PLEASE READ IT!!

i have read until the end, author just deux ex machina-ed an end. but I will still give it a 5 cause it is still a 'good' enough novel.still though, as much as I hate his existence in novel, I have to give mc's predecessor an o7 for his choice, not many would choose the one he did.

Dead already? No updates and we are going on a week since the last one. Pretty unfortunate if it doesn't even make it past 20 chapters.It is also dumb that reviews have a character limit, not much else I can say about the story, BECAUSE IT'S ONLY AT TWENTY CHAPTERS!

Review based on the 1st Chapter.Good job to the Translator and Editor. The chapter feels very well translated and with few errors. The first chapter seems quite interesting with the world set up and the surprising realistic behavior of the MC. MC doesn't seem to be a beta which is more than I can ask for.

Very small chapters a d uploading is very very slow.Book is very nice story development and quality of writing is also great.+====+==++=+==+=+=+=+==+=++=++=+===

It's cool to find a tree that holds a different world out there. Though both worlds the MC lives in are all waiting for war. Too much conflict, isn't it?Writing is good but needs editing. Update is accordingly done. Pace is relative. MCs are brothers, right? But I haven't read yet about Goshi's Yin wielder brother yet. He was mentioned in the synopsis. World setting elaborately described.

"Why not?" the Baron asked. Rather than disappointed, he was just curious.

"Yes it's fine you can come with me a explore around a bit it won't hurt you and we may even meet your son on the way"

"I'll be fine! I should be… I guess?" Charlotte wavered a little.

Ottar was changed back by the sudden change in the air.

So beforehand I apologize for any further error!

              As it was predicted a few hours later a storm fell from the sky, sometimes lightning illuminated the living room where Zemin Yan with his small 10-year-old boy physique was swinging his wooden sword diligently.